Max is so much like the character I came up with for my “Detective Joe Minotaur” story, “29 Steps Beyond Cool”. His name was, “Bionde Khule” and he wouldn’t even look at you as he was talking to you. It was as if your surroundings were more interesting to him than you.
You’ll find all of the “T.B. and S.B.” skits in order at the bottom. You’ll also find all of the “Detective Joe Minotaur” stories and some of my song rewrites.
All right now, first, a messy-to-neat Randie juxtaposes a neat-to-messy Ryan.
And, next, Randie carries on an in-her-head conversation while Max is in the room,
while on the flip side*, Max is likely carrying on his own internal coversation, only filling-in the answers to his many questions for Randie, just to speed things up and keep the flow going.
Things just seem to balance out.
Brig, one Sunday you should do up a double point-of-view conversation between Max and Randie. Max could talk and then answer for Randie in one of those cloud balloons. (What Max says and hears in return) Then Randie could have the same conversation, only as she answers herself while Max speeds on ahead. (What Randie’s mouth says and her head answers in return)
* — “on the flip side”, yeah, today is record store day, with bands and foods, plus deals on records, books, tapes, movies, t-shirts, toys, etc. sweet.
Max is so much like the character I came up with for my “Detective Joe Minotaur” story, “29 Steps Beyond Cool”. His name was, “Bionde Khule” and he wouldn’t even look at you as he was talking to you. It was as if your surroundings were more interesting to him than you.
If you liked the “T.B. and S.B.” stories from last Sunday, check out:
http://image66amarillo.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=1175
You’ll find all of the “T.B. and S.B.” skits in order at the bottom. You’ll also find all of the “Detective Joe Minotaur” stories and some of my song rewrites.
We all know someone like Max.
All right now, first, a messy-to-neat Randie juxtaposes a neat-to-messy Ryan.
And, next, Randie carries on an in-her-head conversation while Max is in the room,
while on the flip side*, Max is likely carrying on his own internal coversation, only filling-in the answers to his many questions for Randie, just to speed things up and keep the flow going.
Things just seem to balance out.
Brig, one Sunday you should do up a double point-of-view conversation between Max and Randie. Max could talk and then answer for Randie in one of those cloud balloons. (What Max says and hears in return) Then Randie could have the same conversation, only as she answers herself while Max speeds on ahead. (What Randie’s mouth says and her head answers in return)
* — “on the flip side”, yeah, today is record store day, with bands and foods, plus deals on records, books, tapes, movies, t-shirts, toys, etc. sweet.